Horror ver of my oc is done!! But what should I improve though?

I've been on this Subreddit for like a month, tried to delete my own post I fucked up with and…

Have some “FUN”! (Sprunki Pyramixed Mix) View Reddit by DueBreak3595 – View Source

Time Paradox Ly View Reddit by dearfuse – View Source

Something is bad with mard and snap… View Reddit by Rich-Restaurant2507 – View Source

just my second oc info View Reddit by Attitude0k6748 – View Source