Which of my OC should I redesign?

Teaser for OC Guidebook View Reddit by somesillysprunker – View Source

WHAT ARE YOU DONIG OREN AND PINKI?????? View Reddit by KnowledgeEntire4324 – View Source

The eye in his mouth sees you. What do you do? View Reddit by Dense-Marketing9670 – View Source

ding dong Gluckr: im going to the door! Gluckr:a box, for me? View Reddit by ELECTROLUSTZ1133 – View Source

Gray’s and jevin’s sounds are bad View Reddit by Bub_The_Sprunk – View Source